Feed Back on Assessment one (Essay Writing)

Feedback to the learner:
A poor essay, lacking citation and any reference list. It has major issues bordering on plagiarism with the failure to acknowledge authorship through appropriate citation. Please ensure you have academic support before attempting any further writing tasks at the terititary level.

Email Kathryn Mc Cull,
Re Peer Tutoring George Borrie plus English Lesson at International.

Comment Summary
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1. Apart from needing 5cm left hand border, accurate general formatting of essay.
2. Check word choice world not word. Very good introduction otherwise.
3. Add these two sections into the introduction above.
4. Remember this is a formal essay- write from the third person, not from a personal perspective.
5. Citation needed here.
6. When? Be specific. Find the information needed to be accurate.
7. Please make sure you check the spelling of Anselm Franke- and use his surname not his first name when mentioning him in your essay.
8. citation needed here to support you statments

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