assessment 1

correcting and adding more detail to my story.

Story Concept 1

Mr. Dee is a hardworking 35 years fellow whose daily life is to go to the office and work like a robot and come back home. He is unmarried and doesn't prefer being in a relationship. His parents got separated when he was 13. He loves cars and has some old collection of cars like Maserati Ghibli, Chevrolet Camaro. He makes quite good earnings from his job and he is considerably successful. 

Despite this, he is very isolated from society, He always feels lonely, sad and lives all by himself. He doesn't have any friends to hangout or any pets to pet. The reason for this might be just because everyone is busy making money from their work and no one has extra time to indulge for a conversation with each other.

Early in the morning, he wakes up, opens the front window curtain and grabs a cigarette from the drawer. Then he tries to light it up, but first, he decides to take a quick look of the outside view from the window.  Meanwhile, he notices a flying bird, approaching his window. He keeps his eyes open and observes the incident. Suddenly, He realizes an owl bringing him a gift and a letter which says, "try this you will feel better". Inside the box, he sees the number of rollies, picks it up and put it on the table. He thinks they all are cigarettes but those were some thing else, It was made up of psychoactive plants that could make one high, namely Ganja or Cannabis in English.

Then, he lights one of the rollies. As soon as he tries it, the First thing he does is simply smile and becomes heedlessness. He finds it nice and considers taking it to his office. He puts all the rollies in his office bag then he carries it and heads out for work. He seems to be very happy and cheerful. As he enters the office, he greets people around him. Everyone is shocked, they all find it unusual. He was the only one who seems to be happy entirely in the building.

A group of people from his workplace are very curious to know the reason behind his happiness, they think that Mr. Dee might be hiding something from them. They plan to investigate and begin to search everywhere including his office Table, drawer and cupboard. But fails to find anything. Then they decide to leave. While leaving something moves making a scratchy sound from his office bag, one of the employees notices it and quickly gives it checks it, He finds a number of rollies (with cartoony smiles from rollies), they want to try it. heads outside and tries taking turns. afterward, everyone smiles and enjoys their work happily.

Mr. Dee returns to his office, he sees everyone happy and laughing at work. He wonders why they might be laughing. In a quick move, he checks his bag and sees it empty, at this time he is numb, and his movement is still for a while. Currently, his head is looking down to his bag, his eyes are big, and his facial expression is shocked.

After a minute or so, he moves, he points out his finger to other mates and laughs harder. Later, the crowd joins, they have a laugh together.

It’s 6pm and Mr, dee needs to head back home, He leaves from his work. reaches home, makes some food in the kitchen and goes to sleep.

An owl brings the same thing every day. Later he pets the owl, builts a nest and takes very good care of it. The process continues he takes ganja brought by an owl and takes it to the office and share it with other employees, the whole building seems to be very smoky, the smoke goes in the sky, goes up and up. Finally, the meditating Lord Shiva gets the smell of it, sniffs it while his eyes are closed then simply smiles.

character detail.

Name: Dick Thompson 
Nickname: Mr. Dee
height: 5 feet tall
weigh: 74 kg
Interest: loves eating, foodie, love to smoke weed and cigarette.